23/3/14
Finally got my whole brochure done For VCD studio, Still have lots to refine
I'm happy about critiques that I get from classmates, that will keep me going for now.
-when i folded this I realized that the width needed to be longer.
-Texts are all in caps so it is really hard for people to read: pull all the text down to lower case. + reduce the letter size and change font to Garamond.
-catholic church architecture under icons looks a bit random. Put it in heading.
-pics under the map are out of grid, reduce the size and align it with icons.
-Create my own map. Maybe with stain glass.
but i will have to find a way to incorporate stain glass idea with other spreads as well for consistency.
-Body copy: Garamond
-Try to incorporate stain glass idea with spreads
-Pull out circle on the right to see if it flows better.
-Body copy: Garamond
-Try to incorporate stain glass idea with spreads
-Body copy: Garamond
-Try to incorporate stain glass idea with spreads
-Design wise this is great, but it might be a bit random.
Try to put address under maps and bring in some fun fact about this churches
FOR EXAMPLE Materials that the building was built in. (putting wood texture in)
Organs for Old st paul's, Pillars for sacred heart etc.
-abstracted stain glass.
I was totally going for hills and seas and wind in Wellington
Squiggly line quality comes from Wellington art culture.
but my designs for brochure have thin lines and lots of spaces around it
so i might as well change design of stain glass
and bring in colours from inside of brochure so it doesn't look too random.